no.

I think the clothes look fine (there should be a few folds here and there); it's the face that bothers me a little. I can't put my finger on it, though.

Lovely arm work there- the position is slanted appropriately, and the arms add to the dynamic feel about the picture. Wish you had done something more with the hair, but it's alright the way it is for now. ^^

Finish it soon; I can't wait to see the final version!